JohnJenkins2315's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Yestahday]

Pretty Good

This would have been funnier if you had animated the whole body. Plus don't forget the rule of thirds. The Audio sounds great though.

frizzyo responds:

This was made completely out of boredom. It was originally going to be an intro to my big project I'm working on, but then I didn't like it and changed it to be random. The body will be fully animated in my big project. Side ones might be made in the meantime, not sure. And yeah, the rule of thirds is very useful. After I uploaded this, I was thinking that it was showing too much space to the right.

[Demon Damien]

Almost there

I loved the house, loved the music and loved the mischief. As soon as the little Demon shows up, however, it goes downhill. Give him a nice exciting pose or have him do something that foreshadows the series when he pops onto the screen. Also, a trailer for a web series shouldn't loop. There should be a back menu with a website and a facebook and a foosebook and a twitter and a twatter and all that mess.

[Macdroid]

It was funny

I like the humor in this one and the cultural relevance, but the audio was muffled and the sound effect for the Google beat down needed more "ooompf".

[Halo: Beta 1.2]

Little too boring.

The graphics were ok for the soldiers, but the background was empty and there was no interesting movement. The voice acting was dead. Also, the audio overlaps.

[Coming Soon...]

This was ok

It starts out really good, and then it goes flat and then it picks up again. A lot of the problem was just bad humor, especially in the truck jump scene. You should come up with an original name too. The Avatar motif has nothing to do with this one.

MrScriblam responds:

IM SORRY I SHOULDVE NAMED IT 'PEOPLE WILL MISS THE JOKE: THE MOVIE'

[Typical Life of a Hobo]

Happens all the time

Yeah I clicked the hobo on the screen and nothing happened so I assumed that was a bum pun of some sort. Very interesting look into the typical life cycle of a hobo. Story is well put together.

[WGJ4K: Psychic Surgery]

It feels soo right!

There are a million elements in this movie and they're all done right.

[Chiro-practical]

Well played

There should have been a thud when he hit the floor. It's like he fell into a black hole. Also the audio was cracking too much.

JunkYardAnimations responds:

hey good points actually, maybe ill animate him hitting the floor and re-upload it. thanks dude!