JohnJenkins2315's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Quick Facial Animatioin]

I was reluctant to give it a five because I didn't like the implications of where the animation was going. It could have been a lot more expressive and dynamic. Maybe this person sighs as she's moving her head or swings her head more. This one was too basic.

PeterNicholsonArt responds:

Haha It was going nowhere! It isn't part of a scene or even a defined character. It's just a quick exercise of movement.
Thanks for the comment :)

[The Melody Of Life]

Great Music

Yeah I really love MS Paint and I think it's a great program. But seriously, this is a great music video; I love the story and teh animations flows through. And don't worry; you'll find true love soon enough.

emoboylurver responds:

thank you :)

[Air Kick + Decap V1]

At least it stops at the end.

Just slow it down a bit so we can read it better.

GamingStuff responds:

I'm trying to slow it down at the end i dont know how plus this Was Just a Test it will Be a Full Fight soon Once i get all the Actual Animation in I will add music and Sound Effects! :D

[Predators Parody]

Great Parody

I like it mostly because it's not chock full of spoilers. Not to say that I want to see the movie; it's the principal is all.

PrivateJoker152 responds:

Movie was boring and predictable (so is this animation), I'll be better. Really thank you for support with your review, every kind of feedback means a lot to me :)

[Yestahday]

Pretty Good

This would have been funnier if you had animated the whole body. Plus don't forget the rule of thirds. The Audio sounds great though.

frizzyo responds:

This was made completely out of boredom. It was originally going to be an intro to my big project I'm working on, but then I didn't like it and changed it to be random. The body will be fully animated in my big project. Side ones might be made in the meantime, not sure. And yeah, the rule of thirds is very useful. After I uploaded this, I was thinking that it was showing too much space to the right.

[Coming Soon...]

This was ok

It starts out really good, and then it goes flat and then it picks up again. A lot of the problem was just bad humor, especially in the truck jump scene. You should come up with an original name too. The Avatar motif has nothing to do with this one.

MrScriblam responds:

IM SORRY I SHOULDVE NAMED IT 'PEOPLE WILL MISS THE JOKE: THE MOVIE'

[Chiro-practical]

Well played

There should have been a thud when he hit the floor. It's like he fell into a black hole. Also the audio was cracking too much.

JunkYardAnimations responds:

hey good points actually, maybe ill animate him hitting the floor and re-upload it. thanks dude!

[Kanook - Ep. 1 Part 1]

Good Animation

I understand that you're going for the anthropomorphised effect but it's hard to feel that when the main characters are being referred to using rigid scientific designations. Also, the main character wouldn't have any use for pearls.

larkinheather responds:

Hi! Thanks for the comment. Do you feel that the characters are less relate-able because I put the latin names? Also, the pearls are supposed to be special ... maybe that's not clear ...